Our simple life which looks ordinary, can be an Epic.
Really?
I think so. Here are my thoughts and what do you think?
Life is a sweet
poetry
Every moment we write a new verse
From the feelings of love, sweetness and serenity
Every breath is the
Celebration of life
The rhythm of love
In the verses of smile
Eyes sing the song of the success
Heart composes the sonnet of kindness
Here the bliss fill the beats in the song
and
Lips smile with the peace of the heart
The spirituality becomes
The epic of the life
Even destiny tunes
Itself in the rhythm of this epic
Hatred melts in the bliss of love
The soul expresses the
Freedom like the dove
Desires end at the
Completeness of the love
But the success grows like
The shadow of the love
Life becomes an epic of love
And
This epic becomes
The expression of peace
More such sweet songs at Lifesong section, I know you will love to read them and I love to read your comments, thoughts :).
This poem is presented in Marathi Also : Jeevan Ek Mahakavya. If you love different languges don't miss to read this one.
This poem is presented in Marathi Also : Jeevan Ek Mahakavya. If you love different languges don't miss to read this one.
Life is definetly a difficult topic for a poem ,a lot has been said and written so potraying something new is challenging and you have done a great job Mohi..sprituality is really epic of life. Sprituality may differ in meaning but in any form it always remains essence of mortal life.
ReplyDeleteLife is definetly a difficult topic for a poem ,a lot has been said and written so potraying something new is challenging and you have done a great job Mohi..sprituality is really epic of life. Sprituality may differ in meaning but in any form it always remains essence of mortal life.
ReplyDeletePrecious thought from my friend Priyadarshi Mirshra,
ReplyDelete"Life is definetly a difficult topic for a poem ,a lot has been said and written so portraying something new is challenging and you have done a great job Mohi..sprituality is really epic of life. Sprituality may differ in meaning but in any form it always remains essence of mortal life. "
Thanks Darsh, for a precious thought on the poem, very happy to see your comment after a long time. :)