'still' waiting for you
walking with life; pain and smile
'still' and still moving
~~o~~
still awake in night
for new thoughts; searching the spring
freshness in the dark
~~o~~
still I love you with
hopeful heart; never broken
awaiting always
~~o~~
she is still scared by
that trauma; abuse ruined her
flourishing sweet life
Physical, verbal, emotional, financial any kind of abuse is enough to ruin the life. Most of the times stories of victims are hidden, because they can't find courage to share their torture.
Such simple words for such strong feelings, Very good :)
ReplyDeleteA very touching tale.. Mohiniiji and how true..
ReplyDeleteAmazing play of the word... And a very important subject you have addressed... Very well done... very true!
ReplyDeleteabrupt fourth ....clear, touching ,real first 3
ReplyDeletethe last one is sad
ReplyDeletethree still haiku and-senryu
Excellent haiku ~ last one out of sync a bit ~ life happens ~ hugs ^_^ ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery special set of haiku. All say their message well. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteFrighteningly true in 3rd haiku, Mohinee ! In many cases violence seemed the way out! Great take!
ReplyDeleteHank
wonderfully done mohinee... :)
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