Life Is So Beautiful....When

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The song of life has no beginning and no end! This part of the song is dedicated to my dearest brother, Deepak K. Shrivastava. Hey ! Deepak! Once You dedicated me,
"Sari Umar Hame Sang Rahna Hai!"
Remember? 

I can't give You anything back, in return of your love. But these are some beautiful words from The Heart dedicated to You! You always love my anger and non - stop talks, You can control trains but can't control my Talks. Then I know You will surely Love This. 

Me -The flower is always smiling in front of the world, but can't hide anything, my sorrows, tensions from You! You know the meaning of this Photo. See the eyes of the kittens! 





Life is so Beautiful.....
When 
I am with You
Life is so Beautiful.....
When 
I think of You
Life is so Beautiful.....
When
You call me 'Bachhi!'
Life becomes more beautiful
When
You call me 'Chutki!'
Life is so Beautiful.....
When
I see, You Happy, Very Happy
By Teasing me like a Kid!
Life is so Beautiful.....
When You Say,
"Chutki! I love You ma Sweet Sis!"
Life is so Beautiful.....
When 
I miss You!
Life is so Beautiful.....
When 
I cry missing You
I love that Tears
That roll when I missYou!
But 
My Dearest Brother!
Life is not at all Beautiful
When 
I get angry with you!
But 
Life is very Beautiful
Coz
 You never get angry with Me.
Life is so Beautiful 
Life is so Beautiful.....
When 
I feel You are with me
Though 
I sometimes can't see You!
Life is not Beautiful
When
I talk like mad n don't let You Study
Life is so Beautiful
When 
We fight like these Kittens
Life is so Beautiful
When
You share all my Sorrows and Tears
But 
Life is not at all Beautiful
When
You don't share Your Tears and Sorrows









P.S.: "This Poem has been written for BLOGJUNTA NaPoWriMo"  Here is the link of that happening place where we get new inspirations to write more and more. www.blogjunta.com. 

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Comments

  1. umeshpatelFebruary 22, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    too good, nice taught!

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  2. Mohini PuranikFebruary 22, 2011 at 2:42 PM

    Hi Umesh! Thanks a lot dear! Very happy you liked it. :)

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  3. dnyaneshFebruary 22, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    EXCELLENT, Beautiful song,great Expressions. I'm in tears.

    It is the Great Fortune to have Divine sister like you. The one & ONLY MOHINEE. GOD bless you.GOD bless you.

    Also cute kittens.

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  4. Mohini PuranikFebruary 22, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    So Sweeeeet Dada! I love You! :) You put a sweet smile back on my face. I was so sad the whole day, coz Deepak was not here coz of his net connection problem. I will never forget this sweet love written by You!

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  5. TeamgsquareFebruary 22, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    Strong emotions .

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  6. Mohini PuranikFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    Thanks a lot Team G Square for strong comment happy you liked this one :)

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  7. ArpanaFebruary 22, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    yes life is really beautiful when we accept the fact.

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  8. Mohini PuranikFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    Thanks a lot Arpana for the sweet response. :)

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  9. SimranFebruary 23, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    Wow!!
    Beautiful writing skill :)
    Glad that shared your emotions here with us
    Keep Expressing :)

    Check out mine :)
    http://myfriendshipsimran.blogspot.com/

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  10. geeta singhFebruary 23, 2011 at 3:44 PM

    chooo cuteee :)

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  11. ArtiFebruary 23, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    Beautiful poem! Brothers are always like that isnt it! Deepak is really very lucky to have a sis like you:-)

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  12. Mohini PuranikFebruary 23, 2011 at 11:30 PM

    Hi Simran! Welcome to this divine blog. And Thanks a lot dear for visiting my blog and giving your link too. Your blog is very beautiful with beautiful words too. Very happy you liked my sweet poem. Thanks you so much ! :)

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  13. Mohini PuranikFebruary 23, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    Hi Geeta ! Thank you! shoooooo shwwwwwtttttt! :)

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  14. Mohini PuranikFebruary 23, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    Hi Arti ! Such a sweet response yes! brothers are always like that! I am very lucky too having brother like Deepak and friend like you! :)

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  15. Mohini PuranikFebruary 23, 2011 at 11:41 PM

    Thank you so much for promoting this post friends!
    Life is so beautiful when
    You all come here
    and give your sweeeet responses.
    But life is sho shad when Deepak
    has not said anything. :((

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  16. pramodFebruary 24, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    very brotherly,
    great one.

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  17. Mohini PuranikFebruary 24, 2011 at 7:34 PM

    Namaste Pramodji! Great to see you here again! Have you noticed that This blog was missing you here! Thanks for such a sweet response.

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  18. Mohini PuranikFebruary 24, 2011 at 7:46 PM

    Thanks a lot for the precious vote too Pramodji!

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  19. magiceyeFebruary 24, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    wonderful sense of bonding

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  20. Mohini PuranikFebruary 25, 2011 at 1:38 AM

    Thank you so much Deepak Sir! :) it's a really different and wonderful thought you gave here.

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  21. Lakshmi RajanFebruary 25, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    Beautifully expressed feeling. I wish I had a sis too like you :)

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  22. StrangerFebruary 25, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    Oye.... Chutki
    lov u darling... it's an awesome feeling having a sis like u... can't tell u how much i love u bacchi....

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  23. Mohini PuranikFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    Hi Lakshmi! Welcome to the site. Such a sweet wish! Don't you feel me as a sis! :).

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  24. Mohini PuranikFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:40 PM

    Deepak! The Hero of the song so late! U know Deepak! I know,you can't tell it's beyond the words! but i can feel.! Aage se comment nahi kiya to ............

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  25. PanchaliFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    absolutely heartwarming poem. Beautiful verses.


    panchali sengupta

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  26. Mohini PuranikFebruary 25, 2011 at 10:50 PM

    Hey Panchali! Welcome Dear! I loved your swweeeeeet responsee! Thanks dear!

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  27. UnknownFebruary 25, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    I liked you poem. Very beautiful poem.

    Ram A
    www.maibolunga.blogspot.com

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  28. Mohini PuranikFebruary 26, 2011 at 2:27 AM

    Hi Ramji! Welcome to the site Ram! Thanks a lot for your beautiful response. Happy you liked my poem. :)

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  29. Mohini PuranikFebruary 26, 2011 at 2:29 AM

    Thanks for following my blog too! Ram!

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  30. smFebruary 27, 2011 at 12:41 AM

    beautiful poem
    yes life is beautiful when

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  31. Mohini PuranikApril 14, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    Thanks a lot SM! I was not here, when you give your beautiful response.....sorry for tooo much late....:)

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  32. Best Hosting ServieceApril 14, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    WOw its a nice poem every one loves her brother very much, Indian culture rakhya bandhana in that day we remember our brother but this poem will remind your brother every day. What a great thought u give such a emotional feeling for brother thanks......

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  33. Mohini PuranikApril 14, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    Hi Best Hosting Services, Welcome to the blog, Thank you so much for such a sweet response. I really loved the way you say, he is so loving, that everyday if I write new poem on him, still it will not enough!

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  34. dnyaneshApril 16, 2011 at 6:52 AM

    CONGRTULATION MOHINI,for Best Poem Award
    I am very very happy .

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  35. Mohini PuranikApril 16, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    I love you Dada!

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  36. Guru PrasadOctober 2, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    awesome :)

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  37. mohinipuranikOctober 4, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Welcome GuruPrasad......thank you so much.....:)

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