Behind mask of dark
clouds; rain of hopes is present
just wait some moments
Every darkness, all the bad days end with a new beginning which is fresh like fresh pure rain. We should wait for just few moments....
This Haiku is the part of Haiku Heights for the prompt MASK
This Haiku is the part of Haiku Heights for the prompt MASK
Very optimistic Haiku... loved it..!
ReplyDeleteTruth likes to travel bare feet
Live once and for all
Like for the metaphor used, and idea is expressed in great words!
ReplyDeleteVery motivating haiku....Loved it mohinee :)
ReplyDeleteVery true, in life as well as the weather.
ReplyDeleteYes, perhaps if we wait long enough, the mask will slip away...
ReplyDeleteMask
to Hide Your Fear
ah, lovely breeze,
ReplyDeletewet grass shines happily
dark clouds melted..
I vouch for what you wrote Mohini..my life has been such a fantastic sequence of such interesting interruptions.. but then Sun Shines on my face.. Thanks..your haiku took my breath away...such positivity..
Do visit me here to find some interesting haiku..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/05/mirror-refuses.html#comment-form
cool, clouds are like masks for the sun, and the moon
ReplyDeleteugly man mask
Nicely composed haiku, loved reading it.
ReplyDeleteSomething like 'even the darkest clouds have a silver lining'. I like the optimism and hope in your words. Well penned. :)
ReplyDelete