Today sharing a different form of poem known as hay(na)ku. This has three lines like Haiku, and what special it has....let's see. Many of my friends think that I am too serious, so today, something light, yet deep and sweet to read,
I
Love You
Sweetest three words
Very beautiful
You love listening
Song
From Heart
Will never end
Smiling?
I know
You love this!
Always!
Why not?
Most beautiful song
Expressing
Eternal love
Because of you
You
Make me
Sing this song
Sweet
beautiful words
touching your heart
Imagination
Ends here
Your Love Begins
Death
Ends here
Your love begins
Fear
Vanish here
Love only exists
I
Am mad
In your Love
Because
No Reason
For Eternal Love
I
Will Be
Always The Same
Because
I Love
Your Love Always
You
Are Love
Love Is You
Can't
Stop Writing
Thinking of You
Always
Because You
Are the Love
Can't
Forget you
Love You Always.
As
Usual wrote
Without thinking anything
Krishna!
For You
My love song.
Always
For You
And For You
You
Only You
And Only You...
Eternal
Song this
For eternal Love
Krishna
For Krishna
For Krishna Love
This
Will Never
End anywhere eternal
Supreme
Beyond life
And beyond death
Truth
Is Love
Supreme Krishna Love
Devotion
Is Love
Eternal Krishna Love
Life
Is Love
Forever Krishna Love
Song
Is Love
Like Krishna's flute
I
Love You
Sweetest song ever.
Written for NaPoWriMo Day 21 These are three lines, without restriction of syllables but first line, has one word, second has two and third has three.More about hay(na)ku is in the same link.
Update : Vince Gotera is the inventer of this beautiful form of poetry hay(na)ku. I am honored to have Vince on Gurukripa and according to Vince's suggestion, I have corrected the word. hay(na)ku. Thank you so much Vince.
Update : Vince Gotera is the inventer of this beautiful form of poetry hay(na)ku. I am honored to have Vince on Gurukripa and according to Vince's suggestion, I have corrected the word. hay(na)ku. Thank you so much Vince.
Hello, thanks so much for giving some exposure to the hay(na)ku. I'm the person who named it (and also later invented the hay(na)ku sonnet).
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to point out that there are no spaces in the name. It's all one word, like this: "hay(na)ku" ... the h could be capitalized but the n and the k are not capitalized.
Could you possibly correct it above, in your post? Thanks again.
--Vince Gotera
Namaste Vince, I am really honored to have you here in Gurukripa and sorry for the mistake. I have corrected it. Thank you so much for the visit and kind words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haynaku...I donno about this form ....This form is interesting too....And beautiful song as haynaku dedicated to Lord Krishna...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sparkly Angel, this is new to me too.
ReplyDeleteI don't know about all this I know about flowers about as close as I can get.
ReplyDeleteI do love your poem.
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